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Old 30-03-10, 10:21 PM
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This is going to drive me ever so slightly mental... ah the road to perfection..

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Rather than the first paragraph text I would have built points:
  • Home Made Chocolate Brownies
  • Gift Wrapped
  • 70.4% Cocoa Solids
  • Gluten Free Options
  • ETC

I personally would prefer to see the word "Hand made" rather than "Home made" but others may differ - logo picture to me is perfect choice for your site.

PS: Stick your website address in your signature easier for people to find the site that way.

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Well, I have been busy and thanks to Kip I have a new banner, a bit sad to see my little brownie men go but I think this looks loads better.

Apart from needing to go with my daughter to school tomorrow to brush up on my literacy and some text that is being a bugger and won't let me change the font it's looking good (in my humble opinion)

Phew..

Mama c. I got very good help from virtual marry on the text on my site, if your letracy is not that good like mine. She can work wonders in lightning fast speed, for not alot of the green stuff. it was the best thing i ever did., suttle changes, but made a masive difference

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This is going to drive me ever so slightly mental... ah the road to perfection..

Thanks guys!

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