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10-09-10, 01:03 AM
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updated website
hi guys
its that time again, ive been tidying up the website and would be gratefull for your comments please.  Carpet Cleaning Coventry i wait with baited breath for the onslaught with kleenex ready lol thanks trena
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10-09-10, 10:52 PM
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on the home page, the word spacing looks a bit odd for this text.
"When your carpets need cleaning, do you want to hire the first person who claims they can clean them? Or do you prefer to find a quality carpet cleaning service carried out by fully trained and insured operatives? We've all seen those leaflets offering whole-house cleaning at ridiculously low prices, and " SEO could be improved eg the Services page title is "Services we offer". that would be better changed to eg "Carpet Cleaning Coventry - Services We Offer". on the Latest page, the text looks a bit strange around "We at Fitz2Kleen are now able to offer a treatment to remedy flea and dust mite infestations, it also kills most common viruses and following a thorough clean" Also the page title says "new low prices" which doesn't match the body of the page and could be improved for SEO by adding "Carpet Cleaning Coventry" I hope that helps regards Tom
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11-09-10, 09:24 AM
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I was a little perplexed over the sitemap page
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11-09-10, 10:03 AM
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Thanks guys, taken on board and altered... i think !
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11-09-10, 10:36 AM
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Its good to see lots of places for people to contact you, need to concentrate on specialist markets to make you stand out?
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12-09-10, 05:45 PM
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well ive been playing with it all weekend , im quite happy with it now.
looks better on the eye and i think all other issues have been addressed. opinions please  Carpet Cleaning Coventry
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